Finally Their Escape!


Mondays Finish the Story – January 19th, 2015

My challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided. Don’t forget to use the opening sentence… Please include the photo with your bit of flash and a link back to this site.

Finish the story begins with: “They finally made their escape.”

Please feel free to upload your story by clicking on the little blue fellow below and add your link so that others can enjoy your story too!

Finally Their Escape!



“They finally made their escape.” Fear and anxiety exuded from the couple. Their dog anxiously looked around. Rain-soaked and mud-covered from the weather, they feared death would overtake them. What if nobody found them? Stranded for 3 days with torrential rain and winds, the storm finally ceased today.  The couple’s cellphones had no signal.

They were lost. All made their way slowly down the gravel path toward their original destination. The couple and their dog trekked for miles  but all they saw were trees. The area was uninhabited.

She blamed him. He blamed her. Positive attitudes were absent. Confusion abounded. Both wanted to get away from the city but now longed for a hot shower, soft bed, and food.

Suddenly, the dog heard a rustling in the trees…

Charging toward them at full speed was a large black bear…

There was no final escape!


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